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Lawrence Besong
Professor Chris
Werry
RWS 100
1 September 2014
Clive
Thompson’s Public Thinking
There
seems to be a larger question that Clive Thompson is trying to answer in his
essay. Thompson’s writing includes claims and evidence that state different
examples of how society is affected by technology and how it evolves.
Technology is changing the way people act and thinking about doing things. The
larger question that Clive Thompson is trying to answer is, is the way
technology affecting society for the better or for the worse? Thompson actually
thinks technology is changing society for the better and is truly benefiting
society. The Internet is a big factor in shaping society today, “The internet has
produced a foaming Niagara of writing”(Thompson 46). Across the world,
everybody uses the Internet to communicate, write, comment, read, and this
shows how big the Internet’s involvement is with people.
Thompson
has many claims that he puts into his writing to get his point across to the
reader. Clive Thompson expresses his take on writing and the Internet by
comparing the amount of tweets, e-mails, blogs, etc. to the 35 million books in
the U.S. Library of Congress. “On Facebook we write about 16 billion words per
day”, which shows how much people are actually expressing themselves through
the Internet without even knowing so. Thompson also makes a claim that technology
helps create breakthroughs by connecting people all over the world. For
example, Thompson stated how Duchesne found penicillin however he could not
show it to the world because he was not known enough. However, thirty-two years
Alexander Fleming rediscovered penicillin. If communicating through technology
was possible back then, then millions of people would have been saved over those
three decades. Thompson continued to
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support his claims with very heavy
and well-proven evidence. A third claim that Thompson states in his text is
that technology is not only helping for educational reasons but for everyday
life as well. Thompson says “with mobile phones, our personal geography is
becoming newly relevant in a new way…GPS turns your location into a fresh
source of multiples…”(68). A GPS is just a microcosm of how technology is
changing the modern world for the better.
Is
the way technology affecting society for the better or for the worse? Society
has evolved technology for years now and things have only gotten better. As for
the internet in today’s world, social media is actually contributing to writing
without even knowing it. Things are changing, and things will always change in
the technology world for the better. That is why young students, like myself
should look forward to the future and strive to contribute to technological
advancements for the better of society.
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